
这篇原文是一篇描述性的文字,主要涉及死亡事件和一些医学概念。以下是改写后的文本:
例句:
She died as a result of her injuries.
她因受伤而去世。
400 people a year die of this disease on average.
平均每年有400人死于这种疾病。
Five people died in a house fire last night.
有五人死于昨夜的.住宅火灾。
Her parents died while she was still at school.
她还在读书时父母就去世了。
She died ten years ago but her memory lives on.
她十年前就去世了,但她却留在人们的记忆中。
这篇改写后的文本采用了更生动、具体的方式表达了原文的意思,并且将每个句子进行了重新表述。同时使用了
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例句:
She died as a result of her injuries.
她因受伤而去世。
400 people a year die of this disease on average.
平均每年有400人死于这种疾病。
Five people died in a house fire last night.
有五人死于昨夜的.住宅火灾。
Her parents died while she was still at school.
她还在读书时父母就去世了。
She died ten years ago but her memory lives on.
她十年前就去世了,但她却留在人们的记忆中。
这篇改写后的文本在忠实于原文的基础上,通过具体的实例和生动的表达方式,使原本较为平淡的文字更具吸引力。同时,使用
